Underneath the sky and the shining stars,
In the midst of the woods and scattered flowers...
With the scent of the forest all around,
I hear a faint rustling sound...
Everything is lit by a silver light,
Oh so perfect is this night!!
But somewhere someplace inside of me,
is void of this beauty that I see
Its waiting for another sight,
Its still waiting for a 'perfect night'
9 comments:
lovely poem......so still waiting for perfect night.....i hope that perfect night will come soon...:-)
wohooo...i cant blv u finally did it after all dis time... :)
great work as always... beautiful thots n perfect choice of words...wish d perfect nite comes soon :)
n lemme tell u ur d most contradictory person i've known..still cant claim 2 understand u ;)
lastly b4 i wind up...D zone rocks!!!!!! (lol)
Just beautiful thoughts ...
kyaa imganition hai yaar ..:)
perfect choice of words ...
keep it up buddy ...
Abhi bade bade poets complex feel karenge :)
Awesome....
good job...seeing ur orkut poem "it's original ;-)"...one can expect this from you
and need to mention the honesty to name the blogspot so...
D-Zone really rocks...!!
Good Creation...........If it is your's.....just kidding ........ lovely creation........so this is one more hidden talent .....
This one rocks!.. rather had to.. Its afterall Deepu's!!..
You r the best man!..
I am soo proud of u
wow..this one is really gud composed
you write well !
Excellent....lage raho india... :-)
Beautiful Poem !!
The search of perfection in an almost perfect night is beautiful...
Keep writing.. u really write well
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