I lost my myself in the text and the sound,
I lost myself in the world around...
I fought for a while to keep me alive;
to help myself,to grow and strive...
I saved myself for a while from the wind
that blows away the love from within...
I hate to loose the smile so benign
far away from the worldly shine...
I had for a while the prettiest eyes,
the look of content devoid of vice...
The joyous chuckle, the laughter,the play;
now so distant,so far away...
In a haste to grow on a worldly whim,
I left behind the child within...
9 comments:
Awesome :)
Well really selection of words
Keep it up dear :)
A Little Late, but Worth the Wait... nice composition... get going dzone...
[missing the fun part of typical dzone stuff though]
hey!
you may not remember, but you put a comment long back on my blog www.charcoalart.blogspot.com saying that i wasn't updating it.
I came to your blog to tell that i have grown and do visit my new blog www.ithinkshuffled.blogspot.com.
but then i read your poems..and are they good?!!
especially, this one. and especially the first 4 lines. So simply put!
I envy you..even i have thoughts but never the words :(
impressive...quite good!!
deadly
really nice ...keep it up:)
hey!
do you mind if i put your poem on my blog...Of course I won't plagiarize.
v nice and so touching.. Keep it up.. and if possible then make it a habit to write such things and post it. :)
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